No offense but your sentence structure is far from perfect yourself. I understand that yes, it does look off, who cares it is the internet after all, and I say this in the nicest way possible but if you're going to criticize things on my page, find something more legitimate for me to give a shit over. I'm sure you are a nice person and all, I am pretty nice usually myself. But when people go out of their way just to bother me about a minor gramatical error, it gets under my skin. If it bugs you that damn much, just get off my page. Thanks, -Nikki G.